Once upon a time there was a story that I went on a adventure in the bushes and I found a snake which was a python I walked around the python and I continue until I saw a big monster and I had to defeat the big fat monster somehow but I did it I defeat the big fat monster so I continued and everything was good but something happened I found a friendly monkey he became my pet and I named him James. Me and James continued walking. Everything was very fine so we walked and walked until something went wrong. We both saw a patch of slippery slime then a slime monster came and attacked me and Jame so we both had to run. We ran for a long long time until we went to a place that was very quiet with no animals so we had a picnic. After the picnic we found a Raccoon, it was grey and Black we took a Photo and found a path that took us out of the bushes into a village. In the village there was a house so we went inside. We found out that it was someone's birthday party. James and I joined in the party and the birthday cake was green icing with bushes on top. The alarm rang at 7.30, what a dream it was Time for school.
Hi Aahil, thats an awesome story and I love the very last bit at the end where it was a dream. I had lots of pictures going on in my head as I was reading this. Good work! Wouldnt it be cool to have a pet monkey in real life, would you like that?
ReplyDeleteyes chris I did have some fun writing the big adventure story i really liked the bit that I found a monkey and he became my pet.
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